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Do you want a critique on this? I don't have a premium account but I can still give my 2 cents on it.
If you don't want it....don't read the below. xD
Love the lighting, the fork, the strawberry on the waffle and the cup. And the plate/background.
Not a huge fan of the strawberry on the left, that is resting on the plate. It doesn't look nearly as bright or vibrant. I would see what it looks like without that strawberry (if you get a chance in the future. xD), I think it would make the waffle attract your eye more. Banana slices look good! The strawberry just takes away from them. The orange slices are super vibrant, kind of helps balance it a bit, but perhaps move it around and see how it affects the picture.
All in all, I love it! You don't really notice the dull strawberry until you analyze the picture. (: